Production Logo Tests

For our opening sequence we was told we had to create a production logo for the start of it. My group came up with an idea to have a hand slamming on a window and then our production company tattooed onto the hand in editing. We filmed a few takes but in all of them there was something wrong. Here's one clip that went wrong:








Reason why it isn't good:

• the hand is in the wrong position so when we edit the production name onto the hand it will look weird and  not central.
• the top can be seen in the shot which will make it look really unprofessional.
• you can see the reflection of people walking past the window which again will make it look unprofessional.
• the background doesn't have any relation to our opening sequence or to the production logo.
• the hand was only flat on the window for less than 3 seconds which wont be enough time to add the production logo.
• the ambient sounds are not what we want the audience to here.

We then took all these points on board and made one last video that we really liked and thought we could work with. There's still some things we want to change but its a massive improvement on the first video. Here's the updated clip:

When editing we will:

• increase the light intensity to reflect our pure theme in the opening sequence.
• edit the production logo onto the hand.
• cut the first 5 seconds of the video because its quite long till the hand appears.
•  enhance the ambient sound of the wind and make it hyperbolic.